What happens is that Side will often break through the fast-moving, but often opaque surface of language-as-language into something like this:
my love I
need you so
much but more
than else I'm
waiting for you
There is a relationship being posited, and the poem's velocity can be taken as a metaphor for the poet's escape, or attempted escape. It is also important to note that specific scenes do get interspersed in the "deluge" format:
as to how
many erections she
caused in a
crowded room who
can say with
signs and signals
from her hips
The title of the poem implies a kind of address to manhood itself, what constitutes being a man-in-the-world. This address to/of manhood is complicated by the relationship scenario that is enacted in the poem:
all day and
night I fight
for light while
you were with
my mistress it
just makes a
fuck of me
as I go
up to the
south of hills
The relationship is ambiguous, manhood (as presented here) is ambiguous, and it all goes by so fast that the poem demands multiple readings. There is also a song-lyric quality to many of the most memorable bits in the poem:
I can't get
you under I
can't be leaving
you not until
I've done everything
I have to
This visceral, heightened formality is one I look for in poetry right now. It's Language poetry, with greater velocity, more affective drama and intensity, a kind of balls-out sangfroid. Yet, the implied presence of music does not preclude an engagement with poetry-as-history:
calling all cars
calling all cars
Keats let me
down too much
you left before
we could be
strangers this is
a trying time
Burns and Milton also put in memorable appearances. Bits of rhyme jazz the thing up as well:
life with fetters
cut from water
pearl you never
The following bit, for me, is the heart of the poem:
night and you
had a pocket
to keep you
out of sight
as you tried
to be so
helpful but maybe
we never existed
separately so nothing
can be sacred
and I cannot
love or hate
and I have
no care for
fate and it
will be chaos
in the end